Praising Children: Evaluative vs. Descriptive

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“Good job!” “What a wonderful story!” “Your painting is beautiful!” Sound familiar? If you are like me, you have used these words to encourage children, hoping they will feel good about themselves, their work, and their efforts. Our intentions are good but what if the affect is not what we intended? What if our words leave children wondering—or even worrying—about all the times when they didn’t do a good job, or wrote a mediocre story or tore the paper when they were painting? What happens next time when we aren’t there to bestow our blessing on their work? It is not our approval, evaluation or critique of a child’s work that matters. Children need to make their own conclusions and our comments should merely help inform that self-assessment.

 

Dr. Haim Ginott (author of Teacher and Child: A Book for Parents and Teachers), famously wrote about how to communicate with children. If you are not familiar with his work, you can watch video footage of him in interviews on YouTube. He is entertaining, and his deep respect for children is very apparent. One of the topics he addressed was praise. (Adele Faber and Elaine Mazlish, authors of How to Talk So Kids Will Listen & Listen So Kids Will Talk, continue the discussion.) While Dr. Ginott describes various subtleties in how we talk to children, the most important message is to replace evaluative praise with descriptive praise.

 

What Is Evaluative Praise?

When we judge what we see instead of describing it, we are providing evaluative praise (e.g., good, best, perfect, beautiful, great). When we attach a character trait to a child, instead of describing what they did, we are providing evaluative praise (e.g., honest, smart, generous, helpful, hardworking). According to Dr. Ginott evaluative praise creates dependence. The child looks to the person giving the praise to determine his self-worth.

 

What is Descriptive Praise?

Instead of judging what we see, we can simply describe what we see the child has done (e.g., mixed red and yellow to make orange, played a piece of music with crescendos in just the right places, wrote a story that helps the reader feel what the character is feeling). Descriptive praise is very specific and comes from thoughtful observation.   Instead of describing an action we could describe what the child might be feeling. “You hung up your jacket all by yourself, and last month you couldn’t reach the hook. You look really pleased with yourself.” Let the child evaluate his or her own actions.

Praising Children: Evaluative vs. Descriptive

 

Some More Examples

When my daughter practices her violin, it is tempting to just say, “It sounds beautiful,” but instead I really listen to her playing and I tell her I notice the way she subtly draws out just the right notes with her bow, creating a certain mood. Or when she shares her latest piece of writing, I notice her strong, unique voice in the characters she creates and the way she talks to the reader. When my 3-year-old son finishes a puzzle, I acknowledge how he feels (based on his expression): “You did that puzzle all by yourself. You must be so pleased.” When he makes up a song on his Ukulele, I notice the instrumental introduction, the way he keeps a steady beat, how he changes things up by clapping or plucking the strings instead of strumming. (His lyrics consisted mostly of bathroom words, but never mind.) You get the idea.

 

Suggestions to Make Praise More Descriptive

 

  • Be specific. Throw out the list of character traits for labeling behavior and simply describe what you observe. “You put all the trucks on the shelves where they belong. Now you’ll know right where to find them next time.”
  • Show appreciation. Name exactly what the child did and how it helps you. “Thank you for setting the table tonight. Now I have more time to read books with you.”
  • Leave out “you.” Use “I” statements or focus on the action, but not the person. “The paint spilled on the table. Here’s a towel.” Or reword the praise above: “The trucks were put back on the shelves where they belong. They will be easy to find next time.”
  • Ask more questions. Instead of praise, ask questions. “How did you make that?” “How did you decide what to paint?” “What do you like about… (the materials used or the product)?”
  • What would I say to Shakespeare? Ginott describes how adults speak differently to other adults. If we met Shakespeare we would not say, “Wow! Great job. You used your sparkle words.” We might comment on our favorite passage or marvel at his play on words.
  • Be observant. In order to change how we praise children, we need to really look and listen. It requires more time and more attention to detail.
  • Take some advice from Lilly (of Lilly’s Purple Plastic Purse fame) and just say, “Wow” because sometimes that’s all you can say. And beam.

 

Is it easy? No. Do my children want to hear how great they are? Of course. But as fabulous as they may be in my eye, ultimately they need to know their own worth.

 

 

Laurie Feola

Meet Laurie Feola, our resident book buff. With her incredible love for literary goodness, Laurie uses her worldly teaching know-how to help students solve the mystery of the written word. Laurie holds an MEd from the University of Minnesota and is certified to teach Grades 1–6 in the state of Washington. She taught for six years in California, North Carolina, and England. When she’s not mothering two lovely children, you can find her hiking, biking, and swing-dancing the night away.

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  1. I appreciate the examples and suggestions that help make the difference between evaluative and descriptive clear. This article can be put to practice in our home immediately. Thank you!

  2. What a great article! I have a great e-book to recommend: Encouraging Words for Kids by Kelly Bartlett. She gave many examples on what you can say.

  3. This is great information. I learned some of these same speech habits years ago from a mentor mom of mine, and it has always stuck with me. I shared this on facebook because I think other parents would really like the practical help changing their speech habits from “good job” to something more specific, and the reasons behind it. Thank you!
    Sarah M

  4. Very informative! This article has given me tools to use with my children right away. Thank you! You are a great writer! HA! I mean how do you think you did? =)

  5. I agree with everything said, but I’d like to suggest a slightly different wording. A long time ago, as a new preschool teacher, I read an article simply titled “Praise or Encouragement?” I think adding the word ‘praise’ to ‘descriptive’ muddies the water when what is intended is not exactly praise but rather a keen attention to or encouragement of what the child is doing.

  6. A very thought provoking article written by a very creative mom/teacher who is not afraid to think out of the box! I love the concept of descriptive praise 🙂

  7. I am so grateful to see people are reading and sharing this post. Thank you for the comments and suggestions. I hope the article will spark conversations around the dinner table, in the teacher’s lounge, and on the playground.

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